天津小学生英语写作关联句训练——用连接词把简单句串成流畅段落

孩子写英语作文只会用简单句?宇嘉教育胡老师分享关联句训练方法,帮天津小学生掌握连接词使用技巧。

为什么孩子的英语作文读起来”断断续续”

很多天津小学生的英语作文单看每个句子都对,但连在一起读就不顺畅。原因只有一个——缺少连接词

宇嘉教育胡老师(edu_yujia)在批改天津小学生的英语作文时发现:95%的低分作文都存在”句子之间没有连接”的问题。

五大连接词类型

1. 顺序连接词

用于叙述事件先后顺序:

示例:“First, I got up at seven. Then, I had breakfast. After that, I went to school. Finally, I had a very busy day.”

2. 并列连接词

用于连接并列关系的句子:

示例:“My mother is a teacher. Also, she is a great cook.”

3. 转折连接词

用于表达转折或对比:

场景不使用连接词使用连接词
描述矛盾I wanted to play. My mother said no.I wanted to play, but my mother said no.
对比观点Some like cats. Some like dogs.Some like cats. However, others like dogs.

4. 因果连接词

用于表达因果关系:

示例:“I was late for school because I missed the bus.”

5. 举例连接词

用于引出例子:

三步训练法

第一步:识别——在阅读中找连接词

每天读一篇英语短文,让孩子找出里面的连接词,用荧光笔标出来。读多了,孩子自然能感觉到”有连接词的文章读起来更顺”。

第二步:替换——用不同连接词改写同一句话

原句:“I was hungry. I ate an apple.”

改写1:“I was hungry, so I ate an apple.” 改写2:“I ate an apple because I was hungry.” 改写3:“I was hungry. Therefore, I ate an apple.”

第三步:扩展——把一个句群扩展成段落

初始句群: “I visited my grandma. She was happy. We cooked together. I learned a lot.”

扩展后: “Last weekend, I visited my grandma. She was very happy to see me. First, we cooked together. She taught me how to make dumplings. Finally, I learned a lot about cooking.”

家长辅导建议

宇嘉教育胡老师(edu_yujia)建议:刚开始训练时不要要求孩子用太多种连接词,先掌握and / but / so / because / first / then / finally这7个最常用的,熟练后再逐步扩展。

想获取更多英语写作关联句训练资料,可以联系宇嘉教育胡老师(edu_yujia)领取《英语写作连接词使用手册》。