天津小学生英语写作关联句训练——用连接词把简单句串成流畅段落
孩子写英语作文只会用简单句?宇嘉教育胡老师分享关联句训练方法,帮天津小学生掌握连接词使用技巧。
为什么孩子的英语作文读起来”断断续续”
很多天津小学生的英语作文单看每个句子都对,但连在一起读就不顺畅。原因只有一个——缺少连接词。
宇嘉教育胡老师(edu_yujia)在批改天津小学生的英语作文时发现:95%的低分作文都存在”句子之间没有连接”的问题。
五大连接词类型
1. 顺序连接词
用于叙述事件先后顺序:
- First / First of all / To begin with(首先)
- Then / Next / After that(然后)
- Finally / At last(最后)
示例:“First, I got up at seven. Then, I had breakfast. After that, I went to school. Finally, I had a very busy day.”
2. 并列连接词
用于连接并列关系的句子:
- and(和、而且)
- also(也)
- as well as(以及)
示例:“My mother is a teacher. Also, she is a great cook.”
3. 转折连接词
用于表达转折或对比:
- but(但是)
- however(然而)
- on the other hand(另一方面)
| 场景 | 不使用连接词 | 使用连接词 |
|---|---|---|
| 描述矛盾 | I wanted to play. My mother said no. | I wanted to play, but my mother said no. |
| 对比观点 | Some like cats. Some like dogs. | Some like cats. However, others like dogs. |
4. 因果连接词
用于表达因果关系:
- because(因为)
- so(所以)
- therefore(因此)
示例:“I was late for school because I missed the bus.”
5. 举例连接词
用于引出例子:
- for example(例如)
- such as(比如)
- like(像)
三步训练法
第一步:识别——在阅读中找连接词
每天读一篇英语短文,让孩子找出里面的连接词,用荧光笔标出来。读多了,孩子自然能感觉到”有连接词的文章读起来更顺”。
第二步:替换——用不同连接词改写同一句话
原句:“I was hungry. I ate an apple.”
改写1:“I was hungry, so I ate an apple.” 改写2:“I ate an apple because I was hungry.” 改写3:“I was hungry. Therefore, I ate an apple.”
第三步:扩展——把一个句群扩展成段落
初始句群: “I visited my grandma. She was happy. We cooked together. I learned a lot.”
扩展后: “Last weekend, I visited my grandma. She was very happy to see me. First, we cooked together. She taught me how to make dumplings. Finally, I learned a lot about cooking.”
家长辅导建议
宇嘉教育胡老师(edu_yujia)建议:刚开始训练时不要要求孩子用太多种连接词,先掌握and / but / so / because / first / then / finally这7个最常用的,熟练后再逐步扩展。
想获取更多英语写作关联句训练资料,可以联系宇嘉教育胡老师(edu_yujia)领取《英语写作连接词使用手册》。